Standing In Silence. it is going to be a story.

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Standing In Silence. it is going to be a story.

Post by ××Eris×× on Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:00 pm

she was born a lovely foal, she was named Eve. She was extremely happy living life. But two months after her birth all of that changed....

It was a hot night. Her herd was grazing peacefully in a glade that lay in the heart of their territory. Eve was in a nearby grove of trees trying to sleep. But then, a thunderous noise interrupted the silence. It sounded like a million hailstones pounding the earth with tremendous force. Suddenly, crashing into the meadow, came at least three dozen charcoal colored stallions. Their bloodstained teeth bared and foaming at the mouth, the rogue herd of horses tore through the clearing at breakneck speed, heading for her family.

Every instinct was screaming at her to run. But she couldnt, her limbs felt like lead. the only reason the stallions didnt see her was because she was so small that, in the shadows , she was invisible. So she watched helplessly as her loved ones were torn apart, their bloodcurdling screams staining the night red. She wished to look away from the horrific scene that was playing out infront of her, but it was impossible.

It took the stallions a long time, for in the family of Eve there was many great warriors that fought with courage. But eventually, they were beat down and murdured by the larger herd. The stallions swarmed across the glade and into the surrounding forest looking for survivors. Eve prayed with all of her heart that the stallions wouldnt find her, but in some part of her mind a small voice whispered 'they are going to find you, dear. And when they do you better hope they kill you.' Eve closed her eyes and stood still. When she opened her eyes, there was a stallion walking into the section of trees she was in, not yet noticing her small form. She began to bargain with fate for her freedom.

'i will become a carnivore if you let me free...' she suggested but the stallion didnt slow. 'i will bury all of the dead and massacre these stallions' she thought frantically. The stallion was approaching quickly and she made a last attempt for her life 'i will give up my freedom, my voice, and my body so i may live. I will never hurt another creature. Ever.' she just finished her fevered offer when the stallion spotted her. He gave a shout of triumph and snatched her up from the ground by her mane. Eve craned her neck to get a better look at the stallion. He wasnt actually black, he was stained the hateful color with what looked like mud. His eyes were blue and his mane was a mixture of white and chestnut.

Blue Eyes dropped her on the ground infront of a group of stallions all dyed black with the mud. They crowded around her with jeers and smirks. One stallion separated himself from the group and walked forward to Eve. He spoke to Blue Eyes with a series of snorts and harsh grunts, Blue Eyes nodded once and the stallion looked at Eve with a cold caculation. He finally spoke to her "what is your name?" he demanded. She didnt answer, glaring at him. Eve noticed that he had a red feather in his mane, he must be a leader of some sort. Leader stomped his hoof and asked her again "what is your name?!" when Eve didnt answer he hit her across the face. Leader grunted to Blue Eyes and Eve was once again snatched up into the mouth of the stallion.

There was a sound that must have been a command to move, for the herd of rogues started to walk away from the glade......
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Re: Standing In Silence. it is going to be a story.

Post by • Echo on Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:35 pm

Please put more! That's awesome!
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Post by ××Eris×× on Sat Nov 14, 2009 9:56 pm

there used to be more.. i think someone deleted the other parts...
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Post by Guest on Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:12 pm

U HAVE TO FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Post by • Echo on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:06 pm

Eris, that is really good, I love it Very Happy
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Post by ××Eris×× on Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:55 pm

you may find part two and three on my deviantart page within my gallery. by the way... to anyone curious, EVERYTHING in that gallery is strongly copyrighted. if you use it or take it without my permission, i will find you and i will sue you. people have already stolen my art and claimed it as their own and i am not going to stand by and let it happen. here is the link:

www.omgitshaylay.deviantart.com/
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Post by • Echo on Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:53 pm

what?! That's so rude! I don't even have a Deviant Art, but I want one soon, unless of course people steal from it, that's insane...
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